I am a student at in Uru Mānuka. In 2020 I was a year 9 and in 2021 I will be a year 10. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Hi Lincoln, Tobey here. Great slide on the Great Pacific Garbage Patch I really like how simple the slide is and how easy it is to read. Next time you could add some information on why you did this task and remove the blank slide at the end. Great work. BYE!
Hello Lincoln, Richard here. I am very impressed by your work it was very descriptive about the problems we face with climate change etc. Their could be some improvements made but I am overall impressed, well done!
Nice slideshow I like how you also added examples of causes and effects.
ReplyDeleteHi Lincoln, Tobey here.
ReplyDeleteGreat slide on the Great Pacific Garbage Patch I really like how simple the slide is and how easy it is to read.
Next time you could add some information on why you did this task and remove the blank slide at the end.
Great work.
BYE!
Hello Lincoln, Richard here. I am very impressed by your work it was very descriptive about the problems we face with climate change etc. Their could be some improvements made but I am overall impressed, well done!
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